| Regimental number | 63 |
| Place of birth | Ballarat Victoria |
| Religion | Church of England |
| Occupation | Painter |
| Address | 14 Dawson Street, Ballarat South, Victoria |
| Marital status | Single |
| Age at embarkation | 22 |
| Next of kin | Father, Jacob O Moon, 14 Dawson Street, Ballarat South, Victoria |
| Enlistment date | |
| Rank on enlistment | Sergeant |
| Unit name | 8th Battalion, A Company |
| AWM Embarkation Roll number | 23/25/1 |
| Embarkation details | Unit embarked from Melbourne, Victoria, on board Transport A24 Benalla on |
| Rank from Nominal Roll | Sergeant |
| Unit from Nominal Roll | 8th Battalion |
| Fate | Killed in Action |
| Age at death from cemetery records | 22 |
| Place of burial | Shrapnel Valley Cemetery (Plot II, Row C, Grave No. 27), Gallipoli, Turkey |
| Panel number, Roll of Honour, Australian War Memorial | 53 |
| Miscellaneous information from cemetery records | Commemorated on Christ Church Anglican Cathedral Roll of Honour, Ballarat, Victoria. Parents: Jacob and Isabella McLinlock MOON, 1114 Dana Street, Ballarat, Victoria. Native of Newlyn, Victoria |
| Family/military connections | Brother: 22423 Gunner William Elphick MOON, 8th Field Artillery Brigade, killed in action, 25 June 1917. |
| Other details |
War service: Egypt, Gallipoli Medals: 1914-15 Star, British War Medal, Victory Medal |